Evaluating the Reviewer (Part One)

Although the disadvantages of my status as outsider heavily outweigh the advantages, occasionally a situation arises that gives me an opportunity to do something that would probably cause serious difficulties if I were on the faculty of a university or a member of an institutional research team. Perhaps the song "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose" exaggerates, but there are situations where the risk involved in reacting strongly to the incompetence of others is minimal and one is compelled to respond with frankness and vigor.

My idea—that lethal juvenile cancer played an essential role in the origin and evolution of complex animals—has gained some notice in journals; my two Journal of Theoretical Biology Letters and my amplifying book have been cited. But those citations appear in works devoted, not to Bilaterian evolution, which is the subject of my work, but to cancer. In an attempt draw the attention of the evolutionary community to my theory I recently submitted a manuscript to an evolution journal. Unfortunately, after review the journal rejected it. I then emailed the editor, telling him I accepted the finality of his decision, but that I found his reviewers' comments of poor quality. I went on to identify the principal reviewer's failings. My email to him was rather lengthy but I will summarize its major points in this and in subsequent postings.

Prior to sending my manuscript out for review the editor disclosed that he had contacted a few scientists about it, including “Doctor X,” who had previously offered me unsolicited (and unwelcome) advice which was the subject of this posting. In my letter to the editor I quoted  dismissive comments about me and my idea made by “X” in an interview with a journalist and in an email to a third party. I also told the editor that I believe his Reviewer #1 was actually “X” himself or his “intellectual, psychological and ethical clone.” I reached that conclusion because the reviewer’s comments reeked of the smugness “X” adopted in communicating with me.

What is most important in understanding what the reviewer did is that my manuscript contained nothing new; I made no original proposals. It is a concise, fact-based argument for the theory already published in the Journal of Theoretical Biology and in my Nature-reviewed book. By telling the editor that mine is a “dubious global theory” and taking the position that an argument in its favor doesn’t deserve publication in an evolution journal, “X” is implying that the following were wrong: the late James F. Danielli, FRS, founding editor of JTB and his co-reviewing member of that journal’s Editorial Board, Nature’s book reviewer and the Nature editor(s?) who decided, first, that my book was worthy of review and then approved publication of the (generally favorable) review. According to this single individual those biologists were all wrong to publish my ideas and he urged the editor not to allow the readers of his evolution journal to even learn of my theory’s existence.

To give some sense of the principal reviewer’s inaccuracies here’s a quote from my letter to the editor:

"Like [X], the reviewer is weirdly obsessed with “diversity.” In his relatively brief comments he mentions “diversity” or “diverse” thirteen times, giving the erroneous impression that my theory is all about (and only about) the number of extant species in Bilaterians versus the other multicells.

"He ignores what I emphasize: fundamental characteristics of Bilaterians…that distinguish them from cell colonies. To cite just one example, there is the matter of phenotypic uniformity in Bilaterians (to the point of eutely in nematodes and some insects). That widespread uniformity reflects a level of control over the precise construction of the entire soma, a degree of control not found in cell colonies. I think fundamental and obvious differences among multicells require solid theoretical explanation and in the historical science of evolution that means identifying explanatory events that occurred in the past. Reviewer #1 obviously does not. He is content with a theory that is silent on such important distinctions."        

This reviewer has read my book (as did “X”) so he knows that in addition to phenotypic uniformity I offer evolutionarily-effective mechanistic explanations (attributed to cancer selection’s postulated occurrence only in Bilaterians) for other fundamental differences between the Bilaterians and the cell colonies including the following:

UV radiation avoidance. The earliest Bilaterians burrowed in the sea bottom and their nearest descendants crawled on the bottom. The crawlers all possessed non-cellular external coverings and their marine descendants lived (for more than 300 million years) in the sea which itself affords environmental shielding from radiation. Of the terrestrial Bilaterians the only ones to shed external protection against radiation were vertebrates equipped with adaptive immune systems capable of killing cancer cells. Terrestrial invertebrate Bilaterians, which do not possess adaptive immune systems, all seem to have retained external non-cellular radiation shields.  In contrast, some cell colonies, notably jellyfish were not even provided external pigmentation which, like non-cellular shielding, would protect from the effects of mutagenic/carcinogenic radiation.

Flamboyant regeneration. With few exceptions (some annelids, echinoderms, salamanders) Bilaterians do not display the spectacular feats of regeneration found in other multicells.

Programmed senescence.  All Bilaterians display genetically-controlled senescence which I claim (on pages 82 and 83 of my book) is an anti-cancer mechanism. Not incidentally, an American biologist has reached an identical conclusion.

The reviewer does not even mention any of these four fundamental differences, all of which I identified in the peer-reviewed Letters and amplified in the Nature-reviewed book. He simply goes on and on (and on and on) about “diversity,” giving the editor the erroneous impression that because there are thousands of non-Bilaterian multicell species my theory is wrong.

Any student who submitted a paper containing such an egregious error would receive a failing grade. But this reviewer convinced the editor not to inform his readers of my published theory.

© 2013 by James Graham